The Outside
The Hallowed Ones Book Two
Laura Bickle
Laura Bickle
Genre: paranormal YA
Publisher: Harcourt
Date of
Publication: September 3, 2013
ISBN:
978-0544000131
ASIN: B00AUZS6PQ
Number of pages:
320
Word Count: 85000
words
Cover Artist: Shane
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Book Description:
One girl. One road.
One chance to save what remains…
After a plague of
vampires is unleashed in the world, Katie is kicked out of her Amish community
for her refusal to adhere to the new rules of survival. Now in exile, she
enters an outside world of unspeakable violence with only her two “English”
friends and a horse by her side. Together they seek answers and other
survivors—but each sunset brings the threat of vampire attack, and each sunrise
the threat of starvation.
And yet through this
darkness come the shining ones: luminescent men and women with the power to
deflect vampires and survive the night. But can these new people be trusted,
and are they even people at all?
In this
edge-of-your-seat thriller, it’s up to one Amish girl to save her family, her
community, and the boy she loves . . . but what will she be asked to leave
behind in return?
Advance
Praise for The Outside:
“Top-notch. . .
. A horror story with heart and soul.”
—Kirkus, starred
review
“At once horrifying, hopeful, and hauntingly
beautiful, this gorgeous read with its rich textures and spine-tingling
suspense kept me glued to the pages in utter fascination. Laura Bickle is a
master storyteller.”
-Darynda Jones, NY Times Bestselling author of
The Darklight Series
Praise for The Hallowed Ones
"This is a book to make you fear the shadows--a
horrifying and gruesome tale of faith, and things that blink red eyes in the
night. I began reading in the daylight, and read on into the late hours,
leaning close, biting my lip. I could not look away; I was obsessed. Katie is
an unbreakable soul."
—Lauren DeStefano,
New York Times Bestselling author of the Chemical Garden Trilogy
"What an eerily believable, unique story! I can't
stop thinking about it--or shivering."
—Melissa Marr, New
York Times bestselling author of the Wicked Lovely Books
"Tight pacing, suspenseful scenes, Wow! moments
of tension, and exposure into a world I knew little about, The Hallowed Ones is
an exciting, terse read. . . . Laura Bickle's debut novel for young adults has
quickly become my favorite dystopian novel of 2012. . . . It left me wanting
more, so much more."
—readergirlsblog.com
"Readers will find it hard to put down this
suspenseful, scary, compulsively readable adventure."
—Kirkus Reviews
"Katie's an original character, and her
thoughtful rebellion makes her an interesting addition to supernatural
fictions's gallery of strong heroines."
—Bulletin
Excerpt:
Copyright © 2013 by
Laura Bickle
CHAPTER ONE
The
hard part about the end of the world is surviving it, surviving when no angels
scoop you up to fly you away to heaven. God doesn’t speak. But I kept asking.
“Unser Vadder im Himmel
. . .”
My
breath was ragged in my throat, my voice blistering around the words of the
Lord’s Prayer. I spoke in Deitsch, the way my people always did when we prayed.
It didn’t matter if evil understood me, only God.
“. . . Dei Naame loss
heilich sei . . .”
I
opened my arms, my coat and dark skirts flapping around my legs and wrists. I
stared out at a field, holding a sharpened pole in each fist. One had been a
garden hoe in a previous life and the other a shovel. The metal had been
stripped from them, but they were still tools. Weapons. A crumpled piece of
paper was fastened to my chest with straight pins, the writing growing faint
and illegible in the gathering darkness.
Darkness
with eyes.
“Dei Reich loss komme .
. .”
I
strained to see into the night. Shapes seethed. I knew that something terrible
was out there. The bullfrogs had stopped chanting and the late-season crickets
had gone silent. I heard crunching in leaves, saw something shining red.
“Dei Wille loss gedu
sei.”
My
knuckles whitened on the wood in my hands.
“Bonnet,
c’mon!”
My
head snapped around, my bonnet string slapping my chin. I could see two
familiar figures retreating behind me. A short, round woman scurried through
the field. Her platinum hair was bright against the night, almost appearing as
a moon bobbing along churning water. She reached a nervous white horse who was
pawing at the earth, clambered clumsily onto its back. Between her and me, a
lanky shadow in a dark jacket gestured at me with white hands. Alex.
Bonnet. That was Alex’s
nickname for me. My real name is Katie.
Alex
said that God did not rule the end of the world. Alex said the end of the world
was ruled by sun and Darkness. By time. And time was one thing we had very
little of. The light had drained out of the day, and we were vulnerable.
I
saw Alex taking off his jacket, wading through the grass toward me. I
swallowed. That meant that he sensed the same thing I did, that the hair also
stood up on the back of his neck, that he was ready to fight.
He
stripped off his shirt. My heart flip-flopped for a moment and my grip on the
stakes slackened for a fraction of a second. His pale skin was covered by black
sigils that seemed to blur in the twilight. It was cold, but for them to work
well, the creatures pursuing us needed to see them —the same reason I’d pinned
the petition to God to my chest.
I
worked the prayer through my teeth, one eye on the horizon, at the roiling
shadows in the east.
“ . . . Uff die Erd wie
im Himmel.”
“Damn
it, Bonnet.” He grabbed my elbow. He tore the white bonnet off my head, stuffed
it into his pocket.
I
snatched at the strings. “Don’t . . .”
“This
thing makes you a target. I could see you from all the way back there.” He
stabbed a thumb at Ginger’s retreating figure on horseback, melting into the
grass. “It shines like a beacon.”
I
lifted my chin. “Ja. Maybe it
should.”
This
was an argument we repeated often. Though the end of the world had come, I
adhered to the old ways. I was born Amish, and I would die Amish.
But
hopefully not tonight.
Alex’s
eyes narrowed and he looked over my head. I could feel his hand grow cold
through the sleeve of my dress.
“They’re
here,” I breathed.
He
swore.
Alex
pulled me back, back into the tall grass disturbed by a breeze.
My
breath hissed behind my teeth:
“Unser deeglich Brot
gebb uns heit,
Un vergebb unser
Schulde,
Wie mir die vergewwe wu
uns schuldich sinn.”
I
ran. I felt the grass slashing around my skirts as I plunged into the gathering
night. The landscape slipped past, and I had the feeling of flying for a
moment, of hurtling through that striped shadow in which no crickets sang.
But
I knew that a more solid Darkness gathered behind me. I could feel it against
my back, the way the air grew thick and cold, the way it felt above the earth
right before first frost.
The
last lines of the Lord’s Prayer slipped from my lips:
“Un fiehr uns net in die
Versuchung,
Awwer hald uns vum
ewile.
Fer dei is es Reich, die
Graft,
Un die Hallichkeit in
Ewichkeit . . .”
Evil
hissed behind me, crackling like ice popping over a fire. I felt the thread of
a spider web slip through the grass, breaking on my hands.
“Amen.”
I
turned, swinging the hoe in an arc around me. It whipped through the grass with
the sound of a card trapped in bicycle spokes. A pair of glowing eyes leapt
back, but claws scrabbled around the makeshift stake. I lunged with the second
weapon in my left hand. The point struck home into something solid, and that
something shrieked. I fought back the urge to shudder.
Nothing
human made a sound like that. It was a sound like a bobcat wailing at sunset,
mourning the loss of the day. Only this shadow mourned the loss of flesh.
Alex,
ever the anthropologist, had a theory about that sound. In the calmer daylight
hours, he speculated that this shriek had been at the root of the banshee myth,
in an earlier, more orderly age. Once upon a time, when there had been
civilization. I’d never heard the myth before, but I knew that inhuman sound
all too well now.
The
stake broke off in my hand, and I stumbled back with only splinters in my fist.
Something swept up from the grass and ripped at my sleeve with claws.
I
howled, smelling my own blood. The scent would bring more of them.
I
twisted in its grip. The letter pinned to the front of my dress rustled and the
creature with the glowing eyes hissed. It loosened its hold, enough for me to
jam the ruined stake into its face.
I
was no longer a pacifist. I meant to kill.
I
was no stranger to death. We Amish lived close to the earth, under the watchful
eye of God and all of his kingdom. I had helped with the butchering of pigs,
mourned the loss of dogs at my kennel in whelping. I had stood at the bedsides
of my grandparents when they died. I’d held my mother’s last child, a stillborn,
and witnessed a neighbor die during child-birth. Those things had happened in
normal life.
But
when life stopped and God’s kingdom fell into shadow, I saw death in an
entirely different fashion. I had dressed the bodies of women in my community
for burial, only to be forced to cut their heads off before daylight’s fingers
of sunshine had left them. I had seen children torn asunder, reduced to
unrecognizable smears on a ceiling. I had slain men who were once like brothers
to me, impaled them, and burned them.
I
had seen too much.
I
had seen true Darkness.
My
heart thudded against the fabric of my dress and the holy letter pinned there
—small defense against the undead, but still a defense. I thrust down with all
my might to jam the stick into the face of the creature twisting beneath me in
the grass.
This
was not murder, I had decided. This was doing the Lord’s dirty work. Putting
the dead back in the earth.
“Bonnet!”
I
glanced up to see a pale face with a gaping maw hurtling toward me. I saw
fangs, red eyes, little else. I flung my right hand with my remaining stake up
before me, but the creature slammed against it, buffeting me back to the sea of
grass. I landed on my backside, my feet tangled in my skirt. Its cold shadow
passed over me, blocking out the pinpricks of starlight in violet sky. It
smelled like blood.
“Food,” it rasped. “Lovely food . . .” It reached toward my face, gently, reverently,
almost as an intimate might. It was a very human gesture, rendered savage by
the greed in the red eyes. By hunger for the blood that slipped down my arm and
pooled in my palm.
“Get away from her!”
A
black and white blur passed between me and death. Alex. From behind, I could
see the familiar tattoos stretching across his skin: a Djed pillar, sacred to
Osiris. And on his chest, an ankh made of scars, which he told me was the
symbol of eternal life.
It
was nothing like the carefully scripted letter pinned to my dress. It was
called a Himmelsbrief, and had been
made for me by my community’s Hexenmeister, a petition to God on my behalf. But
any symbol of divine power behaved in the same way, the way that crucifixes and
holy water did. God, in whatever guise he chose, did have some power over these
creatures.
The
vampire reached for Alex with an expression of longing.
“Food,”
it whispered, with a nearly palpable sorrow.
But
its hands were stilled just above the ankh burned on Alex’s chest. It was as if
this was an invisible barrier it could not cross. The vampire froze in
puzzlement, and I could almost imagine that some thoughts still rattled around
its head as it had learned what was safe to eat and what was poisonous.
“Not
food,” Alex responded. There was a subtle jerk at his elbow, and the flash of a
silver knife plunged between the vampire’s ribs. The creature clawed,
scratching at the edge of the ankh. I could hear the sizzle of his flesh, a
sound like bacon frying. Black blood flowed over Alex’s wrist. He shoved the
vampire down to the grass, and I could see his knife slashing, the black
droplets of vampire blood clinging to the tips of the grass stalks like dew. I
was still mystified by it, by its lack of redness, by its soft, inklike
consistency. It smelled like iron, though, which was enough to tell what they
had once been. Alex speculated that iron oxidized in their blood, darkening it.
That
black blood was on my wrist. I smeared it against my skirt as Alex’s fingers
wound around my hand. “We’ve got to go. There will be more.”
I
nodded. This was no time to contemplate biology or humanity. This was time to
act, to move. To survive.
We
ran, hand in sticky hand, sliding through the grass like ghosts.
I
could see the bright helmet of Ginger’s hair and the stark white figure of the
horse far before us. We’d given them a head start, which was good —Alex and I
had the only really effective weapons against the vampires. Alex had his
tattoos and I had the Himmelsbrief.
They were more of a deterrent, Alex said, like spraying mace at a perpetrator.
The startlement they created sometimes gave us enough opening to run away. Or
kill.
“Where
are we going?” I asked, casting my gaze about the dark landscape. It was
suicide to be out in the open like this. “We can’t fight until daylight.”
He
shook his head, mouth pressed in a flat line. “I don’t know. The sign said that
there was a church back there, but all we saw was burned timbers. Useless as
shelter, if it was desecrated by the vamps.”
“We’ll
have to find someplace else,” I decided, nodding sharply to myself.
“How
do you feel about sleeping in trees?” His face split open in a lopsided grin,
his teeth white in the darkness. There were some at the horizon we could
possibly reach, but none in the field.
“I’m
quite sure the vampires can climb trees.”
“Maybe
not if we set fire at the roots . . . they don’t like fire.”
I
made a face. “I don’t much fancy the idea of being roasted alive in a tree.”
“Reminds
me of a movie, The Wicker Man . . .”
he began.
I
glanced at him blankly. I had never seen a movie.
“Never
mind, then. I’ll tell you later.”
Ginger’s
horse was climbing a slope ahead of us. This part of the meadow wasn’t
cultivated, and the grass and weeds swelled over this rill in the earth,
perhaps five feet tall, stretching east to west.
My
skin prickled. In the far distance, I could see more glowing eyes gathering.
They had heard us. They smelled blood. I pulled at Alex’s sleeve and pointed.
Ginger
had reached the top of the hillock. She was panting, and her glasses slid down
over her nose. She was dressed as an Amish woman, but she was not one of my
people. She was an Englisher, like Alex. She was an old friend of my family who
had lost everything: her husband, her children. And she was the only part of my
old life I had left. I clung to her.
The
horse stared to the south. His ears flattened, and his eyes dilated black as
obsidian. His nostrils flared, and his tail swished back and forth. He pawed
the earth, pacing nervously. I had found him back on Amish land with an empty
saddle, smeared in blood and with his former rider’s boot still in the stirrup.
We had discovered that the horse had a sixth sense about the vampires. Perhaps
he could sense them the way dogs could sense earthquakes. Or perhaps he was
merely a nervous horse and vampires were everywhere.
Alex
had named him Horus, after an Egyptian god of the sky who defeated evil. Ginger
and I just called him Horace.
“They’re
out there,” Ginger said, staring out at the dark and patting Horace’s sides
soothingly.
“Ja. They’re coming.” I climbed up the
hill, gazing at the flattened trail of grasses we’d left.
Alex
scrambled to the top of the hill. Ginger and I made to rush down the slope on
the other side, but he said: “Wait.”
I
looked up at him, my brows drawing together. “What do you mean?”
Alex
shook his head. He squatted, and squinted to the beginning and the end of the
strangely squiggling formation of land.
“Alex.
We’ve got to go.” Now it was me urging him on.
He
slipped on his jacket. “We wait here.”
Ginger’s
head popped up above the grass line like a platinum gopher. “What are you
talking about? We’ve gotta get moving.” She tugged at Horace’s reins, but he
would not budge. He stood on the pinnacle of the hill as if he were a statue.
Alex
shook his head, and he pressed his hands to the ground. He was smiling. “No. We
wait here. On the hill.”
I
bit my lip. Perhaps the stress of running from vampires for the last several
weeks had caused Alex to finally lose touch with reality. Perhaps he had some
desire to make a last stand. I confessed to myself that I felt like that often.
I hadn’t been baptized, so I wouldn’t get to heaven, but it was sometimes
peaceful to imagine not existing in this chaotic world any longer. I didn’t think I’d be sent to hell, but I just
wasn’t sure.
In
any event, I wasn’t quite ready to test theology.
“Alex,”
I said. “We need to go if we’re to have any chance of—”
“Do
you trust me?”
He
crouched on the top of the hill, looking at me with an infuriatingly jovial
smile. I felt myself frown, but I reached down for his hand. Behind me, Ginger
sighed and scrambled up the grass bank.
We
sat on the crest of the little hill, looking down, as dozens of glowing eyes
converged upon us.
“We’re
screwed,” Ginger said.
I
didn’t disagree with the sentiment.
Those
luminous eyes drew near. I counted more than two dozen pairs. My heart
hammered, and my mouth felt sticky and dry. I fingered the rough edge of my
makeshift weapon. I might be able to kill one vampire with it. Not dozens.
Jagged
silhouettes of people pulled themselves from the grass, like spiders
extricating from webs. I braced myself, clutching my puny staff. Their eyes
swept up the hill. I expected them to rush to us like water in a trench after a
rainstorm.
They
reached up with pale fingers that smelled like metal. Their lips drew back,
hissing, and I could see the thirst in their eyes. But they made no move to climb
the hill.
I
sidled closer to Alex. “What’s stopping them?”
“Holy
ground,” he said, grinning.
My
brows drew together. I didn’t understand. I saw no sign of any human habitation
here. No church. No graveyard. Just this oddly shaped hill that rose up out of
the field.
“How?”
Ginger
started laughing behind me. She turned on her heel and surveyed the sad little
hillock. “I see it now,” she said. She huddled in closer with us when a vampire
snarled at her.
“See
what?”
“We’re
on an Indian mound,” Alex said. “A holy site built by any one of a number of
tribes in this area. They were used as burial mounds, ceremonial sites,
astronomical measurements . . . some, we have no idea what for.”
“How
did you know?” It looked like just a rill in the land to me. A bump.
“See
how it’s sorta shaped like a snake?” He gestured to the west. “It’s hard to see
underneath the tall grass, but notice how it undulates in the ground?” He
swished his hand back and forth like a snake swimming, and I could see some of
the suggestion of a reptile in it.
“I
saw a mound one time that was shaped like a big serpent eating the moon.” He
cocked his head and started to walk off down the snake’s back. “I wonder if
this one is like that . . .”
Ginger
snagged the back collar of his jacket. “No exploring in the dark with the
monsters down below.”
“What
do we do now?” I leaned on my staff. The hissing and bright eyes below were
unnerving. Pale fingers combed through the grass.
Alex
sat down. “We wait for morning.”
I
sighed and knelt down to pray. I could feel the chill of the earth beneath my
knees, dew gathering. My skin crawled at the thought of the creatures, only
feet away. I shut my eyes, trying to prove that I trusted God. He had kept us
safe so far. He would keep us safe as long as it suited his purposes.
That
was part of what I believed —what the Amish believed. We believed in Gelassenheit — surrendering ourselves to
God’s will. It was difficult, at times like this. I struggled to keep my eyes
closed, seeing crescents of light beneath my lashes; I could not quite make
myself trust the darkness.
“Unser Vadder im Himmel
. . .
. . . dei Naame loss
heilich sei . . .”
“Damn.
I wish I had a harmonica,” Alex grumbled.
Review: If you haven't read The Hallowed Ones stop right now and go buy it, then buy The Outside. Everything will be that much clearer to you if you do. Laura Bickle's Amish Dystopian series is really a page turner.
I'm always intrigued by any fiction involving the Amish, most of which is more Christian then this. Laura doesn't take the faith of Katie away in this story, even though the world she lives in is so different, now that there are vampires out there. And these aren't the same kind of vampires we're used to anymore. Yes, they are evil...oh and they don't sparkle! Whoo hoo!
Katie aka "Bonnet", Alex and Ginger are making their way in "The Outside" which is very dangerous. There are more vampires now than humans and even some scared places aren't safe.
This book develops Katie and Alex's relationship. One of the best parts of this book involves the two of them in an abandoned mall having a "Date Night." The scenes of Katie getting ready are priceless, since as an Amish girl, she wouldn't be wearing any of the clothes she finds at the department store.
Not all the characters make it to the end. I won't spoil it and say who comes and goes, but some new additions arrive and one of them is a wolf they named Fenrir after the mythological wolf. How Fenrir came to be part of their group is another wonderful scene in their travels.
This book is hard to review because it is so good, a great continuation from The Hallowed Ones. Laura Bickle's characters are ones you really come to love and you don't want to let go of them when the last page is finally turned. To go into all the things that are fabulous would spoil the story and so much happens in this book that it would be so easy to do that, and I won't.
Laura's does a good job of showing the Amish culture in this book. With Katie you see that you can take the girl out the Amish culture, but you can't take the Amish out of the girl. You often see Katie struggling with the new things in the English world and you see her struggles with faith as well.
Alex is the perfect foil for her and the two are perfect together.
This is truly one of the best young adult series I've read in ages. I highly recommend this book, but only if you have read The Hallowed Ones first. I'm anxious to find out when Book 3 is coming out!
Rating: 5 flowers
Laura Bickle’s
professional background is in criminal justice and library science, and when
she’s not patrolling the stacks at the public library she’s dreaming up stories
about the monsters under the stairs (she also writes contemporary fantasy
novels under the name Alayna Williams).
Laura lives in Ohio
with her husband and six mostly-reformed feral cats.
Twitter: https://twitter.com/Laura_Bickle
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